Improvements for final music video

Based on the feedback from our rough cut from fellow peers, me and my group pointed out the main issues that were wrong in our video. I have listed them below with a short explanation for how and why we have done so.

IMPROVEMENT 1:

The GIF above displays the particular base track of Sylvie lying down which is evidently used too much in comparison to the rest of the base tracks and slowly started to becoming irritating. Our solution is to cut down the use of this base track to a minimum of 3 from 0:36-1:36

IMPROVEMENT 2: (Teacher Feedback)

 

The feedback given back from our teacher was intially to change the track of our song. Upon the first screening of our rough cuts, there was a fault in the music from 2:32-2:33 which had a slight glitch proving a problem for our song. In result of this, we will be adding a cleaner version to the music video after editing is finished just to make sure the sound is correct without any faults.

IMPROVEMENT 3:

 

During the last section of this clip follows 7 very fast beats which then enters the second verse, my group and I want to add our polaroid photo layering here in time with the beats to add the effect of being 'in the moment' which we have planned to achieve. Whereby this will be slotted into our final music video.

IMPROVEMENT 4:

The last improvement was depicted from our peer feed back from our rough cut screening, this particular base track had said to be lacking in movement and sense of 'fun' which stands out as a disadvantage in terms of the music video as a whole. Taking on board this feed back, my group have made the decision to take away this base track as it does not fulfill it's purpose and makes the music video lose it's sense of vibrancy which is a key concept we aim to achieve.