During the process of editing my advertisement I thought that it was again too simple, so I added a 'Turn It Up all over the advertisement in an attempt to add more visual link between my advertisement and my digipack. However, from the feedback I received from students and teachers I was told that now it was too busy and that it was hard to focus on the artist. I was told that my previous idea was better and Sylvie Gray stood out more. The mid shot of her was the focal point of the advertisement and it should not be covered in writing at all. The picture below was my final product.
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